Monday, September 6, 2010

Chapter Sixty-One: Waiting for the Day

Roselyn landed behind a crying Ian.
Roselyn
Time to go, young one.

Hayden stood between Iris and Suri.
Iris
I will kill her-
Hayden kicked her chest and Iris flew so far that she flew off the palace grounds. Hayden walked up to Suri.
Suri
Father-
He raised his hand to silence her.
Hayden
Acting on emotions…I thought I taught you better.
She stood up as he walked past her.
Hayden
I was wrong.
Suri was silent as they approached Roselyn.
Roselyn
She has been shot.
Ian sat next to Roselyn crying.
Suri
Emmylou!
Suri ran to her side.
Roselyn
I removed the bullet from her and Conor.
Suri saw Conor leaning against the wall next to the dead bodies of the Empire. He nodded at her to tell her he’s okay.
Grey
You missed these ones, Hayden.
Floating in the air behind Grey in golden chains was Elijah, Bonka, and Kota.
Hayden
I assumed they were dead. Set them down and I will heal their wounds.
His hands began to glow above Emmylou.
Hayden
I have to do this quickly.
Emmylou began to cough.
Ian
Emmy!
He tried to move forward but Suri held him back.
Roselyn
Suri, go through Merdos’ body to return to base. You must be thinking about Masato when you touch the body. Take the boy and Conor with you.
Suri
Can’t I help?
Hayden
You’ve done enough. We’ll fix the damage you’ve done.
Suri stayed silent again. Conor stood up. He walked towards her holding his shoulder.
Conor
Let’s go, Suri. She’s going to be alright.
Ian
I want to stay here.
He was crying while Suri held his hand tightly. They walked through the invisible portal around Merdos’ body.
Roselyn
Will they be fine?
Hayden
It’s complicated. I can only seal the opening of the wound for now. It will take more time and energy to heal the wounds entirely. Those were caused by Iris’ Dragon Blade. They aren’t meant to be healed.
Golden chains wrapped around Emmylou’s body.
Grey
She should be up and walking by tomorrow.
She was pulled through the portal. The golden chains wrapped themselves around Elijah, Bonka, and Kota again after Hayden was done and pulled them through.
Iris
What amazing strength. He even exceeds the girls.
Iris stood on her shield in the sky far below their mass of land. She began to slowly rise to the top.
Ilias
How boring. I have to wait for Iris. At the least…he’s good.
Hayden walked away from Roselyn and Grey.
Hayden
Go now.
Roselyn
What about you?
Hayden
I shall return by foot. Take Merdos and go.
They disappeared without another question. He raised his hand to the sky and then slammed it down to the ground. A wave of energy flew forward in a circle destroying all in its path.
Ilias
Damn.
The wave pushed him off the palace grounds. The ground shook as Gemma sat down waiting for Ilias.
Gemma
Ilias…
Iris rose slowly to the palace grounds till.
Iris
What is that?
Iris saw Ilias falling with giant pieces of giant pieces from walls and more.
Iris
Brother!
She caught him in a circle with a shield. Hayden jumped off the edge to the Earth’s surface.
Fallen
Did you feel that?
Every in the New Order stood in a circle.
Syn
Do you know who it might be?
Fallen
Hayden just released that energy.
Everyone looked around at each other. They all felt it.
Arkain
Where?
Fallen
The Empire’s nest.
Velis
The White Coats have made their move?
Fallen
Maybe.
Cameron
Doubtful.
They all turned to Cameron. He pulled out the blue orb.
Cameron
That boy who was with us earlier gave us this to communicate with Amros. If Amros was going to move he would have told me himself.
Arkain
Suri.
They all turned to Arkain.
Arkain
Hayden must have gone to get Suri back.
Fallen
That must be it. Suri is like his daughter.
Syn
We still have time then.
Pathion
I don’t see why we don’t go now.
Fallen
It’s a bit odd though. Hayden is up there yet we’ve only felt small amounts on energy. I don’t think Ximendos is there.
Vesper
Where do you think he’d be if not in the palace?
Fallen
Beats me.
Malic
So should we attack now?
Darby
That would be useless. Our mission isn’t to conquer the palace. It’s to destroy the enemy. We wait until tomorrow.
Vesper
I concur. We haven’t even felt Akasha’s energy.
Malic
Something is off.
Fallen jumped out of Syn’s arm.
Fallen
I want you all to train. I have business to attend to.
Fallen disappeared.
Pathion
We don’t need to fucking train.
Darby
Calm yourself.
Darby walked away with Vesper and Tusa.
Syn
Let’s go, Path.
Pathion followed as they left as well.
Velis
So what do you guys think?
Cameron looked into the blue orb.
Cameron
Amros, I’m here.
The blue ball glowed bright.
Arkain
What did you do?
Cameron
I said what you just heard me say!
Then they could see a small Amros in the ball.
Amros
Greetings, young ones.
Malic and Velis came closer behind Cameron and Arkain.
Amros
I’ve been expecting your call.
Arkain felt a sudden anger rush through him. He made fists with his hands.
Cameron
We ran into some trouble. To what do we owe the pleasure?
Amros
I wanted to make sure we were connected so that we knew when to attack. I wouldn’t want us both going into battle blindly.
Cameron
When are you planning on moving?
Amros
Tomorrow at 5pm. Just before the sun goes down.
Arkain
Why so late?
Amros
Everything is better in the dark, Arkain.
Arkain
Where’s Suri?
Amros
She just arrived not too long ago. From what I’ve gathered she just got back from fighting Iris.
Cameron
She fought Iris?
Amros
As I am told.
Arkain
The one you fought?
He said to Cameron.
Cameron
Yes.
Velis
Is she okay?
Amros
Yes. Is that you, Velis? Suddenly concerned with the lives of others, are you?
Velis
We are allies.
Amros
That is true. Yet I never thought of you as the kind to attach yourself to anyone.
Malic
You’d be surprised.
She punched his arm.
Amros
You have the time and you know the location. Can we count on your aid tomorrow?
Cameron
Yes.
Arkain
Of course.
Velis
You got it.
Malic
Hell to the yeah.
Amros
Very well. I shall see you four on the battlefield.
The orb went dark blue again.
Arkain
Well that was easy.
Cameron
Were you expecting something a bit more difficult?
Arkain
I don’t know, man. Planning war isn’t as hard as I thought it would be.
They laughed.

Nick
Long time no see.
Steven looked up from his notepad.
Steven
What do you want, Kasper?
Nick sat down next to him.
Nick
Can’t a friend say hello to his best friend? See how he’s doing?
Steven
Only when it’s convenient to you, right?
Nick
Don’t be like that.
Steven
Can’t you see I’m writing?
Nick
You finally started that novel?
Nick tried to look at his writing but he pulled it away.
Steven
It’s not for show.
Nick
What do you want me to say?
Steven
Sorry works. That’s what normal people say.
Steven stood up.
Steven
Oh but you’re not normal, right? Little pretentious Nicolas Kasper.
Nick
Oh you’re one to talk, right? Super arrogant Marx.
Steven turned around.
Steven
So that’s how it is?
Nick crossed his arms.
Nick
That’s how it is.
Steven gave him a dirty look.
Steven
What do you want, Nick?
Nick
I want you to forgive me.
Steven
And why should I do that?
Nick
Because I’m your friend and it wasn’t my fault.
Steven laughed.
Steven
Is that it? I thought by now you would have come up with something better than that. Come back when you have something a little more sincere.
Nick
I’m sorry. I truly am sorry, Steven.
Steven dropped his notepad on the floor. Then his pencil went too.
Steven
Apology accepted.
They hugged and then Steven picked up his things.
Steven
Where have you been anyways?
Nick
I had a mission. I got back an hour ago.
Steven
What kind of mission?
Nick
Like a delivery boy kind of thing.
Steven
Sounds boring.
Nick
It was at first. Up until I made new friends.
Steven
New friends can be cool.
Nick
Yeah man and I want you to meet them.
Steven
I’m down. Where are they? North of the base or what?
Nick
They’re not here.
Steven looked at Nick confused.
Nick
They’re out by Laguna Beach right now.
Steven
So you want me to leave this base?
Nick
Yeah, if you want to come with me.
Steven
So you’re leaving?
Nick
Yes. I’m leaving for good and I want you to come with me. I joined their ranks and I want to bring my best friend with me. You’re the only human tie I have left in this world. Won’t you come with?
Steven
I don’t know. I don’t want to go back out there. Not until the monsters are gone.
Nick
That’s the thing…we’re going to kill them. We’re going on a mission to end all of this.
Steven was shocked to hear this.
Steven
Really?
Nick
Yeah!
Steven
What if you die?
Nick
Why would you ask that?
Steven
Well I just forgave you for leaving my parents behind and letting them die. I know it wasn’t your fault but I felt angry that we left so fast.
Nick
I could only save one person.
Steven
I know that now. I was just fighting my own self earlier because I didn’t want to forgive you. Now that I have, you want to take me outside of our only safe place? And on top of that you’re going into battle against the monsters that destroyed most of the world?
Nick
That sounds about right.
Steven
So what if you die? Who will I have then? No parents, no best friend, no one.
Nick
I won’t die.
Steven
How do you know that?
Nick
Because I do. I promise.
He gave Steven a thumb up.
Nick
And you know I don’t break my promises.
Steven pushed his hand away.
Steven
Count me out. You’re going to have to do this on your own. I’m staying here.
Nick
Are you sure?
Steven
Yeah. You are meant for bigger things, Nick. You go and save the world. I’ll be here to write the story.
Nick
I won’t be back for awhile.
Steven
Let’s just hope we’re still here by the time you get back. Word around this place is we’re running out of supplies and the Empire is going to find us soon.
Nick
I’ll be back if they do. I won’t let anything happen to you bro.
Steven
I’m counting on that.
He extended his hand.
Steven
Now go talk to your mother and head out. You have to go save the world now.
Nick
I can’t believe you’re staying behind.
Steven
I don’t have the powers you do. If I did I’d be marching into battle with you. I just have a paper and a pen.
Nick
One, Four, Three.
Steven
I love you too bro. Now get to it.
Nick ran off.
Steven
He’s going to be alright.
Steven continued to write in his notepad.


Ximendos
Shall we return?
Kassle
If you’d like to do so. I don’t care either way.
Kade
I have a question.
Ximendos
Speak, my brother.
Kade
You said something about a Syn clan, correct?
Ximendos
I did.
Kade
They are powerful opponents, right?
Ximendos
Yes.
Kade
How powerful?
Ximendos
Very. Shall we leave?
Kade
Why are they so powerful?
Ximendos
Aside from their abilities…they are immortal.
Kassle
Immortal?
Ximendos nodded.
Kade
Immortal? No, I don’t think so.
He put down his cup of vodka.
Kade
Just harder to kill.
They disappeared.

Iris broke the chains that constricted Ilias with her Dragon blade.
Ilias
Nasty little chain.
Iris
How did they manage to get you with this?
Ilias
They came out of nowhere. There was no way for me to dodge them.
Iris
I wasn’t expecting Hayden to come to the girls rescue.
Ilias
Who were you fighting?
Iris
I believe her name is Suri. They all got away.
Ilias
Was she powerful?
Iris
In strength she’d be terrifying if I didn’t have my shield.
Ilias
Like Hayden.
Iris
Apparently she’s his daughter.
Ilias
Interesting. I shall take note of that.
Iris
For?
Ilias
Who not to kill with my own hands.
He walked forward.
Ilias
I will go check on Gemma.
Iris shrugged.
Iris
Very well.

Ilias entered the palace and he grabbed Gemma and held her.
Gemma
You are okay.
Ilias
There was no way they could hurt me.
Gemma held onto his shirt.
Gemma
Don’t do that again.
Ilias
I’m going to teach you how to fight soon. That way you’ll be able to protect yourself.
Gemma
That would be nice.
Ilias
Let’s go to my room.
They stood up and walked to his room.

Ximendos stood in shock at the white surface of his home.
Ximendos
What has happened here?
Kassle and Kade said nothing. Iris appeared before them.
Iris
It was Hayden. He arrived here to rescue Suri from us.
Ximendos put his hand over his mouth.
Ximendos
I should have guessed.
Kassle
The elf?
Ximendos
Yes. My apologies for my home being destroyed.
He said to Kassle and Kade. He turned back to her.
Ximendos
Where was your brother during all this?
Iris
They wrapped a chain around Ilias only my sword could break rendering him useless.
Ximendos
And you?
Iris
Hayden appeared too quickly for me to even know and next thing I knew I was in the air below us.
Ximendos
My child…
He hugged Iris.
Ximendos
I should have been here.
Iris
It’s okay father. We’re all fine.
Ximendos
Wait, where is your mother?
Iris
I don’t know.
Kassle approached Iris.
Kassle
She is beautiful, Ximendos. I am Kassle Christ.
Iris
I am Iris.
Kade
The names Kade.
Iris
It is a pleasure to meet you both.
Kassle
You want buildings?
Kassle snapped his fingers. From the ground buildings began to erupt.
Iris
I can’t believe it.
The area now resembled a giant castle built around the palace room. Iris stood in awe.
Kassle
It’s magic, my darling.
A giant airship appeared above them and landed at a distance. Akasha, Amya, and Forest appeared from it and began to walk forward.
Akasha
What have you done with the place? It looks marvelous!
She stopped in front of them all.
Akasha
Kassle has returned as well.
Kade
My name is Kade.
Akasha
Nice to meet you. I’m Akasha, this is Amya and Forest.
Forest
A true honor to meet you all.
He said to them all.
Forest
I’ve waited a long time to meet you, Ximendos.
He shook Ximendos’ hand.
Ximendos
You must be my sister’s husband. I can’t believe she kept this arrangement a secret.
Amya
There are just some things I like to keep to myself.
Akasha
Well, let’s all have dinner, shall we?
The sun was now under their land in the sky. They all walked to the dining area.



Suri sat down staring into blank space with Conor next to her.
Conor
Don’t beat yourself up about it.
Suri turned to him slowly.
Suri
They almost died. You almost died.
Conor
We all knew the score, Suri. We’re not little kids like they want us to believe we are. We’re young adults and we’re capable of making decisions. So we made a dangerous one and we almost died. So what!
He grabbed her hand.
Conor
We still made it and saw it through. I don’t know about you but I don’t give a fuck what the others have to say. Not a damn word.
Suri smiled.
Suri
At least Emmylou’s going to be alright.
Conor slouched in his seat.
Conor
Thank goodness.
Suri
So what happened?
Conor
Well, we were there waiting for you to beat that bitches ass when all of a sudden I turn around because I noticed she was and there was a man pointing a gun at her. Right when I registered it I just knew I had to take the bullet.
He turned to her.
Conor
These aren’t things you can really think about. You know what I mean? Try to rationalize just what you might do and what the consequences might be. Nope. I just did it.
Suri
You really like her, don’t you?
Conor smiled and then chuckled.
Conor
I guess I do. I think taking a bullet for her really says that. I’d at least like to think so.
He pushed Suri by the shoulder lightly.
Conor
We kissed after they took you away.
Suri
Nice to see you both missed me.
Conor
Shut up. She grabbed me. I won’t say I was offended by it.
He laughed.
Conor
Nope, I really enjoyed it.
The door opened and Luciana came in.
Luciana
You are Suri and Conor?
They both nodded while confused.
Luciana
He has been saying your names since he got back. I just got him to stop crying.
She walked up to them too.
Luciana
I can’t thank you two enough. I know your decision to go might have been stupid…but I don’t blame you guys. You wanted to save people you love. No wrong in that. I’m just glad you both protected my children.
Her voice cracked.
Luciana
With their dad being missing and all…well I just don’t know what I would have done if something happened to them.
She hugged them both.
Luciana
Thank you so much.

Amros, Roselyn, and Grey all stood in the medical area watching over Emmylou, Elijah, Bonka, and Kota.
Amros
Iris carries a unique blade. I’ve gathered that a touch of it will paralyze the person it cuts until she puts it away. That little girl is full of surprises.
Roselyn
The important part is they all made it back alive. Hayden will join us shortly.
Amros
Very well. He is a fast traveler so he should be here by midnight.
The door opened and Suri and Conor came in.
Grey
She’s still sleeping, you’ll have to wait until morning.
Conor
Are you guys upset with us?
All three of them were caught off guard. Emmylou stirred in her bed. She felt so weak. She wanted to get up and hug and thank Conor and Suri but she couldn’t. She could only lie there and listen.
Roselyn
I’ve made haste decisions in my life so no worries.
Amros
It is irrelevant. The important part is you all made it back alive.
Suri
My father wasn’t too pleased with me.
Grey
Is a father ever pleased by his daughter putting her own life into reckless situations? Try to understand, Suri.
Suri
You’re right.
Grey
Understanding where each person is coming from is important. That doesn’t justify anything but it at least helps set the stage for what happens after it all.
Conor
I have a question regarding the incident that occurred hours ago.
Amros
You are more than welcome to ask.
Conor
The guy who shot Emmylou and I was her father.
Amros
We weren’t aware of that.
Amros turned to see Emmylou sleeping.
Amros
How tragic. I hope you all know he is a mind controlled by Ilias.
Suri
We didn’t. Perhaps that can help salvage any relationship they might be able to have after this. I can’t believe Ilias has the power to do such things.
Amros
The Empire is capable of many unspeakable things. Now Conor, your question.
Conor
He was dead when I regained consciousness. What happened to him?
The room was silent until Roselyn spoke.
Roselyn
Her little brother shot him.
Emmylou felt like screaming. She felt like doing a lot of things. All she could do was cry.

Munro and Geremiah walked through the palace.
Munro
I don’t like the idea of fighting for Ximendos very much.
Germ
Neither do I. We at least get something in return for it.
Munro nodded.
Germ
I doubt anyone has the power to kill us anyways. If anything Kassle and Kade will protect us. Our powers will probably stay hidden until the very end.
Munro
The bitter end.
Germ almost laughed.
Germ
The worst part will be killing Ximendos.
Munro
I’m waiting for the day.
Munro smiled a menacing smile.

Amya opened the door to the highest balcony.
Ilias
I was wondering if you were coming.
Amya
I was delayed.
She sat down next to him. Their backs were facing the dark sky.
Amya
Gemma went to go have dinner?
Ilias
Yes. I told my father I wasn’t hungry.
Amya
I heard Hayden made an appearance today.
Ilias
He did. A very short one though. I can’t imagine him staying very long.
Amya agreed.
Amya
The wedding is tomorrow.
Ilias
I’m ready for it. After that I shall be leaving.
Amya
The honeymoon?
Ilias
Yes. You will also be joining us.
Amya
What purpose would I serve?
Ilias
Aside from security reasons, let’s just say the palace will no longer be safe.
Amya
What is going to happen?
Ilias
The White Coats and the New Order will attack tomorrow at sunset.
Amya was taken aback.
Amya
How could you possibly know this?
Ilias didn’t say anything. He tilted his head back.
Ilias
You’ve arrived.
He said this towards the balcony’s end.
Amya
Who are you talking too?
Amya turned around to see who he was talking to. She saw a face she had not seen in a long time. One she didn’t think she’d be seeing so soon.
Fallen
Why have you summoned me?

10 comments:

  1. The more the story unravels the more intrigued I become. Every twist and turn devours me into a state of entrancement. My jaw was dropping and my body was moving closer to the screen as if the story comes alive in front of me. This is some really good stuff, Steven. Kudos to you, man. KU-DOS. I love the way you portray everyone and their relationships with each other it's really well-written.
    I suppose you will be pleased to know I am starting to like Conor more and more.

    This ending was yet another cliffhanger, which I have a love/hate relationship with. What's going to happen now? I can't wait to find out.

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  2. The ending made me shit bricks, is this bad or good for the good guys? I want to find out now!! lol Very good chapter, and I like what your doing as far as the timing of the events as well, very good job.

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  3. Holy hell!!

    Ok first omg i wanted to cry when they said Ian killed his father, thats soo sad but he had to have been brave to pull that off!!

    I hope everyone gets better ..theres a big fight coming and they need all the help they can get.

    And wtf is Ilias and Fallen doing..is it good or bad ..and i dont like Fallen hes two faced, you cant be on both sides, you just cant!!

    Yeah Nick is growing on me for sure aghh!! =) and Velis? she cares now, whaa?!!haha

    Cant wait for whats next, dont keep me waiting for to long :)

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  4. TOOK SO LONG FOR ME TO READ THIS, my apologies.
    So holy fuck!
    Is all I can say.
    You've done a great job with transitioning with different groups of people and I don't even get lost. Must read next chapter! I'll give a more detailed comment later! xD

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  5. Great chapter.

    I knew Fallen would betray the good guys.

    He's that type of person. Now I'm hating him, very much. -_-

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  6. Okay so I knew Fallen was doing something wrong and I just want to find out what, but that will have to wait. In the meantime, I see the connection to Steven! And it's amazing man, not going to lie. Putting yourself in the story as writing the story really made it an interesting piece of information for me. Hopefully I'm not the only one who caught that.. >.<

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  7. lol figures that Fallen would be behind yet another conspiracy. I am starting to think that he is neither good nor bad. His intention mainly lies in catalyzing a war, for the purpose of using that malevolent energy for some other design. My guess is a dark god.

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  8. So this chapter was fucking great. I enjoy your story always. I can’t say that enough. Arkaining it, is the new way lol.

    Lets get to my 1st observation, such a dope concept, being able to move through Merdos and Masato.

    It’s too cool, them being doorways like that to two different locations <3

    Portals? One, Four, Three Steven. lol

    I def want to make love to your mind lmao

    It was definitely suspenseful how you left us off with Emmylou and Conor last chapter. I’m glad that they are well. I am even happy they got Suri back. They won’t be able to get to use her against my baby boy, Arkain.

    Ian killed his daddy. Dear lord, what Kind of mind will this child go through as he becomes a man? May god have mercy? You are just to raw with some things.

    I can see it now. Showing the lifeless father then when Rose speaks, they show a scene where they reveal Ian pulling the trigger on his father, who is not visibly on the camera. Chills!!!

    LMAO at:
    Cameron:
    Amros, I’m here.
    The blue ball glowed bright.
    Arkain:
    What did you do?
    Cameron:
    I said what you just heard me say!

    Point?

    I literally bursted out laughing.
    I love your ability to bring humor in skillfully. It’s never over done or pushed. It’s natural. It makes them even more real to me.

    One, Four, Three
    I love you. So understood that. Thought it was clever.

    I must say the connection with Steven is awesome. I don’t know but Nick has grown on me as a Character is a way I was not expecting. I appreciate him and look forward to him.

    I’m sorry but the name “Germ” is very fitting to that little pest. As “evil” as Ximy might be. I don’t want him taken out like that. He is one of my favorite characters. I don’t see him as evil but rather, very radical in his beliefs. I respect what he stands by.

    Fallen is breaking my heart, like seriously I can’t do this. I literally tear up because I just do so not want him to be evil or rather I don't want him to betray Cameron or Arkain. I have always been suspicious of him for the longest but this is a new blow. I’m praying he is setting the empire up but I just don’t know.

    Another great cliffhanger! The chapters to come I know will be EPIC! That’s an understatement

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  9. Okay, I'm glad Conor and Emmylou are going to be fine but I can't believe Ian shot his own father. How is he going to feel about that when he finds out he was being controlled? And oh man Hayden is very pissed at Suri, but I guess I would be pissed too.
    I like Nick a whole bunch and of course Steven! <3 lol
    Hmmmmmm I wonder what business Fallen has to attend to??
    Oh that's where fallen went what!!!
    I seriously can't wait for the Battle where everyone fights! that's going to be epic for sure! :D

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  10. Is Fallen a bad guy after all!??! So then, Cameron would have been right! Oh and I love Emmylou's little brother, I feel so bad for him that he had to shoot his father.. I mean, anything to save his sister, but that is so sad! I like that you're putting all thesse different aspects of backstabbing in there. I think its really cool, but I'm wondering if Ximendos will turn good and then the magicians will kill him or not. I'm excited to see what happens as this war comes to an end. D:

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